okayyy
This was ok. I feel like it would be better if the characters had more movement. The sound quality was nice though, no white noise.
okayyy
This was ok. I feel like it would be better if the characters had more movement. The sound quality was nice though, no white noise.
Great work
This was a great piece. You struck with the rhythm very nicely and i really liked how you incorporated the hands and radios into it as well.
great!
it was pretty good. u can move the frames foreward and add frames inbetween to make it slower. that's what i do. :) good luck with future stuff.
oh, and the speed actually worked with the randomness, so it wasn't too fast.
I would do more adding of frames, but after I add like, five more, I get lazy :P
Thanks for the advice and feedback :D
fun randomness
I like ur style of randomness! Out there but u didn't go too far. I also like how you did sorta half black & white, makes it more original. ^-^
inspirational indeed
i thought the naration was excellant, but if u used more pics and more motion in the piece it would that much more amazing.
intense!
very good start to a series, leaves u hanging just enogh to make u want to see the next episode. keep up the intense aninamating!
ha ha
that's was great for a first flash! next time u should add some sound to it. but u reached ur goal of making it funny.
thumbs up
I thought it was really good actually. And I know it must have taken u a while to draw the bodies. People r so complicted :p. The story line could use a little kick to it, but i'm asumeing u'll have more since it's an episode.
Yeah, this one lost a kick when i had to add in more character development. :( Check out Exile: Chapter 1 if you want, as long as you pay attention to the intro, its much more ... kick... heh. Yeah i think its slow starting out really, 3 is getting there, and 4 should really set it off i think. (in terms of what happens and what not, again, this episode is more of a branch into the story still).
I'm majoring in animation in college. Always love feedback, so let me know what you think.
Age 34, Female
lifeguard/ student
Art Institute of Boston
Cape Cod, MA, USA
Joined on 7/29/07